Audience Feedback from Music Promo Pitch

After pitching my new music promo to my peers I asked them for feedback, any questions they had or issues they wanted to bring to me.

Feedback

- Making the concept and symbolise of the music promo clear.
My peers asked whether it my theme of purity was going to be clear enough and displayed effectively through my location.

- Balance between performance and concept elements in the promo.
It was suggested that the balance between the concept and performance elements in my music promo may be to one sided; having to much concept with only a very small amount of performance. 
I will keep having less performance than concept however I could maybe try to include performance shots more within the music promo and mixed with the concept scenes.

- Am I creating star image?
I will be creating star image by only featuring my lead singer throughout my music promo. In the performance shots the musicians faces are not shown, focusing on the instruments not the people. This also brings focus to the lead singer as there is now one else to be distracted by.

- Has it conformed to conventions of the alternative genre?
My peers suggested that there could be ways in which I could use more conventions of the alternative genre to make the song match better with the video.